Mystery

Fruity smells surround me, I’m drowning in the suspense of not knowing what is sitting right in front of me. The sour scent hits my nose like a sharp piece of glass. The tangy stench slithers inside my nose making me scrunch up my face.

An aroma of feelings whizz through me. A stinging feeling hits my hand like an electric wire. It is rough and bumpy like a gravel road.

A wave of sourness pours down my throat. Bitterness is floating around my mouth spreading onto every single bit of it. It feels like someone has just poked me in the mouth with their finger nail.

The colour of a sunflower, bright, yellow. A curved shape with rough edges…

A Lemon!

Real life superheros (William Scurry)

In room 7 we have been researching real life superheroes and we had to find someone who we thought was a real life superhero. I chose a soldier called William Scurry. Then we came up with 3 open ended questions and researched so we could answer the questions. After that we chose either a Powtoon, a slide show, a double door or a poster to present our research. I hope you enjoy my presentation.

metaphor poems

Over the past two weeks Room 7 have been learning how to write effective metaphors. A metaphor is a direct comparison to an object\thing. We made our own metaphor poem. We had to describe ourselves as a lolly, a tree, a vehicle, something in our community, a sandwich and a piece of clothing. 

Year 4 Diligence Award Winner 2017

Emily's speech 2017

Mrs May has disappeared

“Now Grace are you doing for show and tell today” said Mrs May “magic” said Grace ”take it away” “rightio please watch carefully everyone i will start with an easy trick pick a card any card Mrs may” got it” she said. (a few hours later) “now for the finale trick I am going to attempt to make this stuffed bunny go over there” she said as she pointed to the window”boring can’t you do something big and exciting” i said “fine I’ll make Mrs may disappear” “WHAT!!!!!” shouted Mrs may “please stand right here” so she did she walked up and stood right there in the exact place and grace did what she had said she actually tried to do it it didn’t work of course but wait where did she go did grace actually do it? I did it I actually did” she wailed “Mrs may has gone and it’s all my fault” she cried and cried until there was a huge puddle on the floor “how are we going to find her now “ I know we can ask for her shoes and harry can smell he has a good sense of smell you know so off we went to find her shoes when we got to my house had the shoes and were chasing harry to get him to smell the shoes he wouldn’t come but  we finally got him he was in the middle of smelling the shoes when he suddenly started biting them to bits” what’s happening I’ve trained him especially for these sorts of things so why isn't he doing it now we finally found out it was because grace’s wand was playing up so she went to charge it up while she did that we got the shoe fixed up with duct tape suddenly there was a knock on the door and i was very surprised to see mrs may and the invisible spell had already weared off and we all lived happily ever after.THE END

fire Escape writing

Fire escape

Beep! Beep! Beep! I woke up to see red flames trying to get into  my room. My heart was thumping inside me. My face was burning and my mind was whizzing with worries. I had to do something and quick! Fire! Fire! Fire! I yelled. My sister woke up but we couldn’t see each other. We had to get everyone out of the house so we got out of bed and checked the door. It was fine so we opened it and woke everyone up then Dad took charge. He told us we had to touch the kitchen door and if it was hot we had to go out the back door and get to the mailbox. We ended up standing by the mailbox while Mum called the fire brigade. A few minutes later we were out the house the fire was out and we were all safe.

By Emily